The flow of this work is circular flow and
return of feeling--we've ALL been at the edge
of this ledge (some of us have even sent post
cards)
Chris
Bursk - 02/23/2012 9:29 PM
Indeed I have been to the edge of the ledge
-- thanks for our poem that captureseloquently
what that experience is like!
Joanne
Leva - 02/01/2012 5:31 PM
Hi Mary, I'm really drawn to the rhythm of
your poem. Even though you write about the
dismal, the abyss, the ledge, something -
maybe beauty? - reveals itself in a striking
way. Thank you for sharing your poem with
the Online Poetry Professor!
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Poetry Professor is presented by The Montgomery County Poet Laureate Program
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comments:
Lorraine - 03/08/2012 9:00 AM
The flow of this work is circular flow and return of feeling--we've ALL been at the edge of this ledge (some of us have even sent post cards)
Chris Bursk - 02/23/2012 9:29 PM
Indeed I have been to the edge of the ledge -- thanks for our poem that captureseloquently what that experience is like!
Joanne Leva - 02/01/2012 5:31 PM
Hi Mary, I'm really drawn to the rhythm of your poem. Even though you write about the dismal, the abyss, the ledge, something - maybe beauty? - reveals itself in a striking way. Thank you for sharing your poem with the Online Poetry Professor!