comments:

Joanne Leva - 01/29/2012 10:18 AM

Excellent - the way you immediately draw the reader in to a fantasticly complex story line. Well done, Carol Ann!

Carol Ann - 01/29/2012 12:53 PM

I love Noir and Comedy and sometimes both together where you don't know whether to have a seizure or to laugh. Your poem is very,very, clear & artful. http://youtube.com/user/carolbond007

Carol Ann - 01/29/2012 12:57 PM

Joanne the poem is very artful, elegant and the images are clear. for more Noir Poems of Thunder @ Amazon.com & BN.com. http://youtube.com/user/carolbond007

Carol Ann - 01/29/2012 1:01 PM

The poem is excellent like a finely cut diamond. http://youtube.com/user/carolbond007